bobith88's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The technologic breakdown]

it doesn't go anywhere

I have the same problem so I can't really talk much, but you should add more melody. I like it when the melody comes in though. What program did you use?

DjdClark responds:

thanks for the feedback man i use fl studios 9 its a great program

[Inspiration (WIP)]

I likes it!

It needs a bit more length and add some more harmonies, and it'll be a great song.

livewiresound13 responds:

Thanks! :D I hope so.

[Edge Of Space]

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This is awesome. Maybe some editing could fix that annoying static. I really can't blame you for that. Its beautiful though.

MJP-Records responds:

thanks very much!

Its very bizarre because everything I play is inserted directly into the desk so i assume its the audio interface or my mixing technique.

thanks foryour nice comment!
MJP

[Beating Up a Dustbin]

Its not my thing,

But if I wasn't me I would like it. Try to work on making the piece go somewhere. I really can't complain, because I do the same thing. Thats awesome how you used all those noises in it. Keep it up.

About the genre, it isn't dance, it sounds more like a sort of ambient thing. But thats just me maybe.

KitXune responds:

Thank you. That was a useful review.

[The King is Dead (8-Bit)]

Its good

There is one problem. Sometimes there is a pause between sections or they overlap. If you used fl studio do you realize you can trim the blocks when you drop them? It used to happen to me all the time.

NickKaedallus responds:

Heh, I'm using FL, sure.

Thanks for the advice, though this music is REALLY old. I'm making a new, extended, orchestrated version, which I will post here soon :D

Thanks and Rock On!

[Der Bergsteiger]

Really good.

I really like it from 1:39 onward. It reminds me of something i have heard before and loved.

Fortifiv3 responds:

Thanks man

[Dissension]

Great Start

My start was not as good as this in my opinion. Needs some work, but it'll be good when it is done.

Bleaker responds:

Wow, thanks man. I've done a little work on it, but it need a lot more. Thanks for your opinion!

[The Dwarves are a Minority]

nice

great work. the transitions can be a bit too choppy. other then that, a great song

Dwarfus responds:

Thanks for the review.

I agree some of the transitions are weak and choppy- I have a new version I'll be uploading soon. Thanks again!
Dwarfus

[march of hyjinx]

nice

for your first upload very good. Keep it up.

frazzlewazzle responds:

cheers dude it means a lot :D

[All Roads Lead to Somewhere]

this is amazing

this is great, I think it may shoot up to the top fifty list.

Keegs responds:

Haha. I doubt it, but that would be sweet!

Thanks for the review, bud!